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Post by Roapatry on Aug 7, 2007 20:14:38 GMT -5
Well, post your review here, children. I'm kidding. My story is rated 'M' anyway, so children shouldn't read it. There's no lemon yet, though. So you're safe... or are you?! Bwhahaha.
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Post by Aryll on Aug 9, 2007 22:39:34 GMT -5
Chapter 1-6
Riveting! Whoops, I forgot to read the rules. I already read this on FF.net. You need to write a story about Lucian, Volkner or Flint. Oi, they're hot.
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Post by Leon on Aug 9, 2007 23:21:07 GMT -5
omgar I read the chapters posted. It's great! Especially the vocabulary! Write moree! ^o^ Look I remembered to give you a review too.
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Post by Axel on Aug 9, 2007 23:45:46 GMT -5
_-_* Volkner is mine...
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Post by Roapatry on Aug 10, 2007 0:15:07 GMT -5
Thanks to all who actually reviewed! *pokes jordan with my krauser-stick*
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Post by Axel on Aug 10, 2007 1:13:41 GMT -5
ooooh... lol anyways yes it has a very well written dialog - no over use or overbearingly annoying text. Very vivid and exciting luna!
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Hyouta
Luna's Pretties
Luna's lover
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Post by Hyouta on Aug 12, 2007 20:28:38 GMT -5
*gasp* Y-you posted our story! O.O Boy I hope you don't post the lemon... *blush*
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Post by Axel on Aug 12, 2007 22:08:36 GMT -5
you know she's going too. and it IS allowed. Luna your lemon is finished im just adjusting the ending and editing the last part, should I post here, or send it to you by e-mail?
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Post by Aryll on Aug 14, 2007 21:55:59 GMT -5
You know, that was the sexiest god damn lemon I've ever read. Who knew she'd be ... well, never mind, I don't want to ruin it. ^.^ Haha, can't wait to hear every one else's reactions.
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Post by Roapatry on Aug 15, 2007 5:12:59 GMT -5
Heheh, no kidding. I want more people to read this. I get what you're saying though, and I like every one of my characters to be... "new" lol. and yes, Roark, I'm sorry, I had to post it. After all, you are a part of my imagination. The lemon part makes me think of... "Lying is the most fun a girl can have without taking her clothes off" by Panic! at the Disco. Ohhh, a good song to listen to while reading. OR. "Good Vibrations" By Gym Class Heroes I always listen to that song anyway
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Post by Axel on Aug 15, 2007 8:13:58 GMT -5
truley riveting *snickers*
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Post by Roapatry on Aug 15, 2007 18:37:46 GMT -5
Uh.... thanks. Even though I hate that word... lol
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Post by Axel on Aug 15, 2007 18:40:06 GMT -5
hah I just said it to annoy you, but yes it is very well written, not as good as mine, just because im not to good at writing things i am ill-passionate about lol
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Post by Roapatry on Aug 15, 2007 18:55:27 GMT -5
That didn't really make any sense. lol
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Post by Aryll on Sept 1, 2007 0:34:25 GMT -5
I'm sorry your computer died... Did you try starting it in DOS to possibly recover files? That actually was on topic... she lost her computer, hence not being able to put another chapter of that... evil yet wonderful lemon up.
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